The Sensory Thief Part 5

Part 5

The victim’s world was a muffled underwater prison, yet the sight of the Thief with his pale face slicked with a sweaty mask of exhaustion, sent a jolt of pleasure through him. He scrambled back as far as the straps would allow him. He pressed his spine against the chair and tracked the Thief’s every step with his eyes. He waited for the pain of the blade, of the needle, of the next harvest, but it never came. Instead, the Thief moved past him like a ghost, with his gaze fixed on the stairs as though he was drawn to them.

The victim watched, his chest heaved in the silence, as the heavy thud of boots began to retreat upward, leaving him alone with the jars.

The silence was a physical weight, but as the Thief’s footsteps vanished above, the victim’s eyes drifted to the shelf. In the first jar, his tongue floated like a pale, bloated slug in a sea of cobalt blue. He could taste the liquid within the jar. The phantom saltiness flooded his dry mouth, a sharp, brine like sting that tasted of ocean rot and chemical preservation. Then came the smell. Even without a nose, the sulfurous, thick stench of old eggs and stagnant water invaded his mind. It was a heavy, nauseating cloud that coated the inside of his skull, but the most haunting part was the sound. Through the glass of the third jar, where his ears sat suspended within the thick blue liquid. The muffled vibration of distant sounds made him sick. He felt every low, muffled vibration through the liquid, turning the Thief’s movements upstairs into deep, thuds that vibrated through the victim’s every cell. It was as if his soul was being stretched across the room, tethered to glass prisons by invisible, arcing wires.

Driven by a desperate surge of adrenaline, he began to pull against the zip-ties, the rough plastic bit into his wrists until the skin tore that slicked his hand with his own blood. Each tug sent a new vibration through the floor that echoed back to him through a series of sharp underwater cracks. He watched his tongue in the fluid as the phantom taste of copper and sulfur thickened throughout his throat as his exertion intensified. With every inch of progress he made toward the shelf, it felt like dragging his soul through broken glass. His eyes focused on the jars as he realized that to escape the cellar, he’d first have to steal his own senses back from the Thief.

As he tried to launch his entire weight away from the chair, a guttural voiceless scream died in his throat. The plastic zip-ties held firm, acting as a dull, blade against his flesh. There was a sound like silk tearing, as the resistance finally gave way. He watched in a daze as the skin of his right hand sloughed off in one piece, peeling backward from the knuckles to the wrist like a discarded, crimson glove. The exposed muscle and white flashes of tendon were instantly bathed in a hot, frantic rush of blood that splattered the floor in patterns. The sensation was a white-hot sun exploding in his mind, yet he put the pain out of his mind. His hand, a raw weeping mass of meat and bone, reached out with flayed fingers that trembled toward the shelf of jars. The phantom taste of sulfur in his jarred tongue turning into a metallic tang of his own agony.

His skinless hand shook as it narrowed the gap, and his muscles glistened under the dim cellar light as he tried to stretch further. His raw fingertips scraped against the handle of the scalpel, the same tool that caused his torcher was about to be his salvation. But as he lunged, his body screamed in protest against the zip-tie that tethered his other arm in place. With one last quick jerk, he watched in slow-motion horror as the scalpel slid across the table; the rasp of metal against wood grain echoed through the ears in the nearby jar. As the sharp underwater screech stopped, he saw the tool had moved just an inch further. It settled just beyond reach of his crimson stumps. The phantom taste of sulfur in his mouth curdled into the bitter, acidic sting of despair. He was so close he could smell the steel through the jar on the shelf, yet the distance might as well have been a mile through broken glass.

Instant rage shot through him, and he began to slam his raw, skinless hand against the table's edge like a butcher's mallet. Each impact sent a spray of blood across the unreachable blade. In a blind, burst of agony, he lunged one last time, his flayed fist connecting not with the scalpel but with an empty jar. The jar exploded into shards of jagged diamonds that buried themselves deep into his exposed muscle, and the sound oh, the sound was a wave that screamed through the liquid in the jars. He froze; his hand of glass and gore silenced his mind as the terrifying realization of how loud he had just been made him grow cold.

"The bastard had to have heard that." He thought as his body shivered with fright.

He pulled his ruined hand close to his chest, the diamond shards against his raw muscle, and bone felt like crushing gravel and fire. The red haze of pain sparked a primal clarity, and he focused on the thick nylon strap biting into his sternum, then back at the glistening, blood-slicked glass embedded in his knuckles. It was a saw made of his own flesh. Excitement ran through his body for the first time since his abduction, and he needed to use it before it faded away. With a deep guttural breath, he began to press the sharpest edge of a shard against the edge of the nylon strap. The friction of glass on fabric started to fray through the first several inches of the strap.

He sawed with frantic speed, the jagged glass grinding against his own fingers even as it bit into the tough nylon. Each stroke cut little by little that sent the glass blade through the fabric and into the flesh of his chest. His movements quickened when he saw his progress paying off. He felt the heat of his own blood lubricating the glass, making the shards slip and dig deeper into his muscle, but he didn't stop. Then, with a sudden snap that echoed like a gunshot, the first strap gave way. The tension released so suddenly it felt his ribs crack, and for the first time, he the heavy weight against his torso lightened.

The underwater thud-thud-thud in the jar became a physical blow to his absent ears. He was halfway through the second strap, the jagged glass buried deep in his palm that it felt like it had become part of his anatomy. The above sound throughout the cobalt fluid was like a dull drum of doom. He stopped cutting as his chest heaved, the half-frayed nylon tightened under the tension of his frozen body. Blood dripped from the cuts over his chest that filled his lap with a deep pool of his own fluid. He felt the air in the room shift as the cellar door creaked open at the top of the stairs.

His mind raced, and the terror began to swell within him when he knew the Thief was coming. The capture went wild, his skinless hand moved like a piston, and the shards shrieked against the nylon. In his blind panic, the glass slipped, carving a deep canyon into the meat of his own chest inches below the strap. A silent explosion, the pain blinded him even as the 'thud-thud-thud' in the jars grew louder, sharper, and moreover. Each step from above was a hammer blow to his soul, as the shadow of the Thief began to stretch down the cellar’s stairs. He frantically clawed at his own leaking life, his body still tethered to the dark.

Step by agonizing step, the Thief descended the cellar stairs, each heavy thud vibrating through the floorboards and into the cobalt filled jars on the shelf. Desperation took hold of the victim, and he launched into a wild, sawing motion at the stubborn nylon strap with his glass filled fist.

Then, without warning, he stood in the doorway, a silent pale shadow, with his head cocked like a curious predator. He inhaled the sharp tang of fresh blood and the sterile scent of broken glass.

The victim's face, red with agony and terror, swung his ruined, skinless fist in a blind, desperate arc. It was a harmless, pathetic weapon that didn't even make the Thief flinch. He let out a chilling laugh that scared the victim, and with a movement almost too fast to track, he brought a small wooden club down on the victim’s forearm.

CRACK!

The victim watched in a frozen daze as the radius and ulna punched through the skin of his arm, two smooth white fangs of bone exposed to the cold air. Blood sprayed from the fresh wound, and the victim howled in pain. His glass filled hand hung at an impossible angle as his body convulsed out of control. The Thief leaned in close, his eyes reflecting the flickering low light. He whispered into the gaping hole in the side of the victim's head, knowing he couldn't hear.

"Eager to finish, are we? You should rest now. You're far more interesting when you're broken." He smiled with his eyes before he began his work once again.

To be continued…

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