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"Don't scream," a voice whispered, not from the stairs, but from within the wall behind the victim’s head. It was a dry rasp that felt like a distant hope. "Just talk normal. I can hear you. I’m going to help you." It said.

The victim froze; his sightless eyes searched the black void. He wasn't alone. Another witness. Another victim who had survived the torture was here.

"Who are you?" croaked the victim in incoherent gags and sputters. His voice, a throated useless thing, hurt. His unused throat muscles screamed with much effort. He swallowed to soothe the fire in his throat, only to irritate it even more.

"A friend," the wall breathed back. "I’m the one the house forgot," the victim could almost feel the vibration of its words against his skin. "I’m the shadow in the walls. I’ve watched him take your sight, your hearing, your very sense of being, but he’s out now, and the child upstairs won't stop crying until it’s fed. This is the moment the crack has opened," the voice scraped against the back of the victim's skull. "The surgeon is dreaming. You must move."

The surge of hope was a lie that the victim’s mind inhaled like oxygen. "How?" A small blood clot escaped the victim’s mouth with his question. He spat out the curdled tissue and spoke once more. "I can't move. I'm broken." The hope that built up was now lost, the fight was gone, and the victim accepted his bleak fate.

"You are alive!" The wall shouted. The blue liquid within the shelved jars jolted and swayed from the force of the shout. Even the victim was affected, the sharp sound startled his body into a jump that sent a wave of life throughout his being. "He has taken much of you, but you have much more. Your teeth, my friend, you must use them to free your bonds. It won't be easy, but you must. I'm here, we cannot, we must not let him win, not this time. You are stronger than you know. I see that now."

Tears escaped from the victim's hollowed eye sockets, and he craned his neck into an impossible position that placed his teeth against the straps that held down his broken arm. Minutes passed as he chewed bit by bit through the leather strap until it broke free. The second strap that held his other hand was much easier, and when it too broke, the victim’s spirit grew. His head flopped back, and he laughed out solid chunks of coagulated blood that spattered out of his sore mouth. His teeth hurt, but the pain was worth the effort.

"I knew you were the one. There is no time to rest. You must move quickly; you are so close." The voice fell silent, and the victim's fingers fumbled over the bonds that held his torso in place. As soon as the last strap fell free, his body toppled to the concrete floor. There was no time to feel pain, no time to be hurt, it was time to crawl. His fingernails dragged his body across the cold concrete, and every inch was a battle against the stone silence. Above him, the floorboards groaned under the Thief’s unconscious weight, a slow, drumbeat that timed with his escape. After a few painful feet were gained, the voice spoke from across the room.

"Follow the sound of my breath," the voice urged. The voice shifted to the far corner where the coal chute met the foundation. "There’s a gap in the stone, a place where the mortar has rotted into dust. Reach it. Reach deep into the bones of the house."

Once the victim reached the far corner, he pushed his hand into the darkness of the wall, his fingers brushed against something that felt like matted hair and cold, brittle bone. He didn't recoil. He couldn't. The voice in the wall gave him strength. It was the only strength he had left in a world that wanted him dead. His newfound strength soon turned into desperation when his hand gripped the hairy mass within the wall.

"Further, you must reach past the filth," the voice hissed, a command that made the victim’s heart hammer against his ribs like a trapped bird. "The Thief is stirring. I can hear the shift of his lungs. You have to hurry, or you’ll become just another jar on his shelf, a memory he’s already forgotten."

The victim almost panicked, he pushed his arm further into the gap past the hairy mass until the rough stone bit into his shoulder. A slow trickle of blood that smelled like failure escaped through his fresh wound. His fingers brushed against something that wasn't stone or wood. It felt like a metal hook.

"Pull," the voice commanded, "I hear his heart slowing in his sleep, I sense the change in the air, and fear he can smell the blood you’re leaking."

The victim gripped the hook and pulled with all his might. It didn't give like a lever; it tore like old meat. A sudden rush of stagnant air hit his face, which smelled of a century’s worth of trapped dust and fermented hair. The wall opened, and he had breached the inner cellar, the hollow space between the vanity of the house and the rot of the earth.

"Good," the voice cheered, almost licking the shell of my ear. "Now, crawl into the hollow, and hide. Become the splinter. The monster thinks he owns your senses, but he doesn't own the gravity of your spirit. If you can reach the vertical wall behind the kitchen, you can hear the click of the gas line. You can turn his sanctuary into a hellish blaze and end this."

The victim dragged his body into the suffocating crawlspace, the darkness pressed against his sightless eyes until he saw flashes of static purple, and red sparks of his own dying nerves. The wall closed and hid his body from the light.

Above him, the Thief's breathing changed. It wasn't a snore anymore; it was an investigative sniff. He was tasting the breach in the air. Then, without warning, his eyes snapped open, and the hunt had moved from the jars to the very skeleton of the house.

"He's awake," said the voice, "Can you feel his footsteps through the house? He’s looking for his favorite jar. He’s looking for the piece of you he hasn't taken yet." The victim’s mind fractured. The voice in the wall wasn't helping him escape the house; it was guiding him into the darkness of the house, to camouflage him from the Thief. The same space he had been tortured in was now a sanctuary. The force of madness was the only thing keeping his heart from seizing in the dark.

The floorboards shrieked, a warning that the architect of agony had returned to life. The voice in the wall went silent, the dry, papery rasp vanished as if it had never existed, leaving the victim orphaned in the suffocating crawlspace.

The first thud. The first step on the cellar stairs was heavy, a sharp strike that shot through the joists.

A second thud. He moved with a slow deliberation. The sound of his boots against the wood was like a fist hitting a coffin lid. The victim pressed his face into the cold, cement wall, his sightless eyes burned with the effort to see the monster's face through his memory.

"I smell the change in the air," the Thief’s voice rumbled that lacked any human warmth. "I smell the copper of your fear, little jar. I sense you’ve moved. You’ve tried to crawl out of your own skin. I love that you have more fight in you."

Thud number three. He was halfway down the stairs now. You could hear the clink of his keys, the metallic teeth that locked the basement from the real world. The child upstairs had stopped crying, replaced by a loud silence that felt like a predator holding its breath. The victim’s heart hammered like a drum that he was sure the Thief could feel. He was a living crucible of panic. He was trapped in the skeleton of the house while the Thief reached the bottom step. The key slapped the lock open, and the door soon followed. Then, the light switched on and snapped the dark away, which made the victim flinch with fear.

The Thief scanned to empty room before he stepped inside. "Where are you, little jar?"

The victim covered his mouth and tried to silence his breath. His body quaked in an unnatural vibration that made the dust in the crawlspace stir.

"Stop your fear." The voice in the wall whispered. "Control it. You must control it." The victim held himself like a scared child and tried not to weep. He curled up into a ball and made himself as small as he could. He tried to imagine himself in a mother's womb. He needed to feel safe to survive.

"I can feel you, little jar," the Thief’s voice groaned toward the gap in the wall where the victim cowered. "Did the whispers tell you there was a way out? They lied. There is no escape. There are only; the jars."

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This insanity penetrates the mind quickly, only to be forgotten. Then, the ordeal begins from scratch once more. It's a never ending hell with no escape. Like fish on a hook, they wiggle and spasm, making the very space vibrate. The invisible pulse through the air would sicken even a blind man's soul.

In the ceiling of nothingness, no two souls hang the same; the hooks are as unique as the crimes they punish. A rusted point bursts through a woman’s sternum while, beside her, a man is hoisted by a hook that entered his throat and exited through his open mouth. His muffled screams vibrate the air. Some are skewered sideways through the soft tissue of the abdomen, their intestines looping like festive garlands around the cold iron, while others dangle upside down from a hook driven deep through the thick calf muscle. Then, some unlucky souls have the hook penetrate into their brain, yet they still blink, still feel, still weep.

Their wounds of agony never close, never scab, and never heal. The hooks keep the gaping holes weeping in a constant flow of thick, dark gore. Beneath each squirming witness sits a galvanized bucket, ready to catch the crimson of human sap. It is a wet symphony of metallic thuds that goes unnoticed under the moans of the Hookers. This isn't hell, mind you; it's something much worse.

But it is the arrival of the Collectors that curdles the air. These are not creatures of flesh, but naked, emaciated female sacks of bone, their skin so thin and grey it looks like wet parchment stretched over a cage of ribs. Their movements are a series of grotesque, stuttering twitches scraping against the stone floor. They are hairless, their features sunken and hollowed out by centuries of witnessing the harvest. Every orifice, from their eyes, their narrow nostrils, and the corners of their lipless mouths, leak a putrid, clotted, ruddy substance that reeks of deep rot and ancient, fermented death. This clotted discharge trails behind them like a slug’s slime, which is a reminder of the corruption that fuels their existence.

The Collectors do not speak; they breathe in whistling rasps as they lift the heavy buckets of human sap. The raw, crimson liquid is taken to the deepest hollows of the void, where it is processed into an elixir of concentrated suffering. This is the dark sacrament of the void. This recycled agony is not for those who master this vile place, but for the new arrivals. As each soul is first hoisted onto their hook, a Collector approaches them with a rusted blood funnel. They are then forced to drink the processed elixir, shoved down their throats with brutal cruelty. The elixir surges through their veins, repairing their broken bodies just enough to prevent death while simultaneously heightening every nerve ending to a state of unbridled agony. It ensures that the torture never ends, keeping the tethered in a constant state of their own suffering, unable to find the sweet mercy of death to release them from this nightmare. The cycle is unstoppable and a masterpiece of eternal damnation.

Deep within the bowels of the Meat Hook Purgatory, the air grows thick with the tang of harvested life. The humid stench of flatulent rot is overwhelming. Here, the Cookers are shackled shattered souls who once committed the ultimate sin of the destruction of others' joy. They are no longer human; they are processing vats, their bodies surgically warped into a plant of grotesque efficiency. Their bellies, translucent orbs of stretched, purple veined flesh, swell to the point of almost bursting. The raw, recycled blood-sap of the tethered is the only way they quench their thirst. These Cookers are strapped into rusted iron cradles, their limbs withered from disuse while their torsos remain a nightmare of bloat.

The Collectors move among them with a stuttering twitch, carrying the heavy galvanized buckets of raw blood. Once they arrive to empty their haul, it is time for the real suffering to begin. Thick, bone like hoses are forced down the Cookers' throats, bypassing the gag reflex to pump the clotted elixir directly into their fattened bellies. You can hear the liquid filling their cavities, the skin of their abdomens stretching so tight it groans like old leather. As the fluid enters, the Cookers weep blood-pus tears of absolute despair. They beg for mercy in muffled gurgles, their eyes rolling back as the forced blood begins its transmutation within their own misshapen forms.

But the most horrid part of this architecture is the exit. Grafted directly into the Cookers' distended, raw anuses is a long, hollow glass tube, sealed with a putrid, black resin that never dries. As their internal organs process the raw agony of the tethered, the blood is refined, fermented, and processed by the Cookers' own suffering into a thick, concentrated product of malice. The tube catches every drop of this essence as it is expelled in a slow drip from their bowels. The Cookers feel every inch of the glass tube against their sensitive, shredded membranes, their fat bellies churning with violent, guttural flex as they birth the final product. They are the living crucibles of this place, forced to digest the very pain they once ignored in life, ensuring the cycle of pain remains an unstoppable coronation of filth.

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The air in the nursery was thick with the smell of iron scented fluid; it was a locked tomb where the cost of vision was being paid with gray matter. The Thief swayed, the silver spoon trembled in his hand that felt miles away from his body, his vision a fractured mess, electrified into a kaleidoscope of static and crimson. Each time he blinked, the world tilted a little more until his balance lurched and threatened to send him crashing into the ice crate, but his will was like unbreakable bone. He leaned over the crib; his own temple leaked a slow steady trickle of clear fluid that splashed onto the baby creature’s heaving chest. With a grunt that was more of a rattle than a human sound, the Thief’s delicate work of fusing his own frontal lobe tissue to the creature’s optic nerve almost made him sick. He felt the rise of vomit trying to crawl up his throat, but he managed to swallow it down in large gulps.

The room began to turn grey, then a blinding white brain misfire turned the hole in his head into a vacuum of direct conduit to the void. He almost passed out, his knees buckled, his forehead nearly slammed into the creature’s pulsating mass, but he caught himself on the edge of the crib, his fingernails clawed into the wood until they split. He couldn’t see the nerves anymore, only the memory of where they should have been visible in his fractured mind. His fingers moved with clinical precision, weaving the silk through his own warm brain-flesh and the cold, milky orb of the baby creature’s eye.

Stitch number one, the world nearly spun out of control. Stitch number two, silent rings drowned out the creature's breath.

“One the more knot.” The Thief whispered to himself. Then an unexpected optic nerve electrical flare snapped a jolt of cherry lightening through the Thief’s remaining consciousness. He saw it for half a heartbeat and screamed out in pain from the intense flash. The creature’s eye dilated, the pupil shifted from milky white to a deep violet that reflected its creators’ own orbitals.

The surgery is over and in the eyes of the Thief it was a resounding success. The baby thing was no longer just meat; it was now a powerful tool that belonged to a future God. It was a living map of the future, fueled by the genius of its creator's.

The Thief tried to stand to admire the masterpiece he had created from his own mind, but blood loss and fatigue claimed him. The heat in his chest turned cold, his vision snuffed out like a candle’s flame, and gravity pulled him down like a lover. His body collided with the floor with a heavy, hollow thud, his head rested near the feet of the creature’s crib, and darkness claimed what was left of his soul. He had given everything to the creature in that moment, but was it worth it. The Thief’s unresponsive expression said it all. ‘You bet your ass it was worth it.’

As he sank into deep unconsciousness, the baby thing blinked its new eye and tried to focus on the distant ceiling, but visions of the future bled into its sight and scared it into unanswered wails of terror. Its cries echoed throughout the house, bled through the floorboards, and into the underwater ears of the victim downstairs. To him the cries were nothing more than muffled bleats from an unknown origin, but down deep he knew he wasn’t the only one being tortured.

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“Do you see how beautiful you are? Each part of you working together to achieve what was thought impossible, possible. I hold the final piece, the key to unlock that possibility is in this case.” He opened the small tin ice chest and gazed on the eye like treasure. He retrieved the frosty orb, a milky sapphire of a human eye.

“Incredible times, and you are a part of what is incredible about these times.” The Thief held a syringe and extracted a small amount of the clear liquid into the air. “Don’t worry, my boy, nothing but joy awaits you.” He promised, and with a gentle hand, he searched along the creature’s boney spine to find a place to inject the needle. The creature fell under the spell of the syringe and was soon asleep. He kissed it with a soft, loving peck and began the operation.

The Thief didn’t hesitate; the scalpel in his hand carved a fresh, circular trench into the center of the creature’s forehead, the sound of slicing gristle like wet boots in the mud. He peeled back the rubbery flaps of skin and exposed the white, porous bone of the skull underneath. The drilling began with a shallow, visceral cavity. The hand cranked bit made blood and yellow marrow spray over the Thief’s apron in a cinematic mist that created a new Jackson Pollock painting right before his eyes. He cleared the socket to make room for the new eye, and then reached into the ice crate, the near frozen orb stuck to his warm thumb, and with a sickening tear, he freed it from the digit’s skin. He jammed it hard into the fresh, wet hole with a squelch as the optic nerve was forced to fuse with the creature’s raw brain matter. The milky pupil dilated as the ice melted into a red slush that drained down the creature’s face. The surgery was about to be a silent victory that sealed the future behind a veil of stitched meat, but then the Thief noticed a flaw.

The nursery fell silent and felt like an empty tomb that occupied the odor of copper ice melt. The eye was dull, a stagnant orb of milk that refused to take root. It was merely a glass marble in a meat socket, devoid of the spark of true vision. The Thief felt a cold dread rising in his throat it was a failure. He wasn’t a stranger to failure, but for him, it felt like a major setback he could not afford to make. He began to pace the library of his own mind, his boots clicking on the floorboards in a slow, troubled cadence that matched the beating of his own heart. He looked at the scalpel, then at the creature, then at his own reflection in the frosted window. His red eyes darted back and forth in search of the missing piece of the puzzle.

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With fire in his eyes, the Thief's victim swung his broken arm like a medieval mace toward the Thief’s face. He laughed at the useless weapon that almost made contact with him. He never flinched, even when his eyebrows swayed from the built-up breeze from the swing of the human mace. His narrow eyes contradicted his laugh as the desperate flaying from the victim began to die down. His exhaustion was evident from his wheezing breath, and he soon collapsed in the chair, crying at his failure.

The Thief wrapped his gloved fingers around the protruding slick bone of the victim’s broken arm. He groaned with delight as he used it like a lever to pin the thrashing man to the chair. The blood spray pulsed in time with the victim’s frantic heartbeat and painted the Thief’s calm face in a warm, copper mist. He was still and awaited the savory vibration of the victim’s shriek to travel up his arm before he cinched the leather straps over the compound fracture. The buckles bit into the raw, exposed nerves with a sickening crunch.

As he forced the flailing arm down to the chair, the Thief’s apron, a monochromatic painting of warm pulsating crimson, smelled of copper and panic. The way the victim’s body arched off the back of the chair, in a bridge of agony, only heightened the Thief’s iron grip on the protruding bones. Another grin larger than all previous ones scared the victim as hot droplets of his own blood hit his cheek. The Thief tightened the buckles until the victim’s screams were the only thing moving in the room.

He tightened the leather strap and savored the sound of raw muscles being crushed beneath the hide. He leaned down, his breath warm against the victim’s frantic, dilated pupil, and whispered a promise of silence to come.

As he put his full weight into the last notch, the victim’s arm was finally anchored to the chair, and the fight disappeared from the victim. He had come to terms with that the end, that was near.

“Don’t move,” the Thief’s cold voice cutting through the smell of copper and salt, “I need you to see the exact moment the light leaves you.”

Within minutes, the Thief slid a serrated metal tool beneath the sensitive flesh of his victim’s left eye. He ratcheted the gears until the skin of the orbital stretched so tight it began to weep a clear serum. The victim’s remaining consciousness flickered as the Thief took a fine, curved scalpel and began to trace around his eyeball. The blade made a horrid ‘scritch-scritch-scritch’ sound against the tough white sclera. The Thief didn’t cut deep yet; he just peeled back the connective tissues to expose the pulsing; red network of vessels that feed the sight he was about to steal. A hot tear of blood escaped the corner of the eye. It traced a copper path down the victim’s cheek and dripped onto the Thief’s bloody white glove. He leaned in so close his own breath fogged the wet surface of the cornea, “Keep looking at me...” demanded the Thief, “I want to be the last thing your brain ever sees.”

He hooked the optic nerve and began to slowly agonizingly wind it around the silver tool. The tension made the victim’s entire skull vibrate with pure, unadulterated trauma. The sound was a sickening, wet ‘schlick-pop’ as the internal pressure of the eye began to fail. The clear eye jelly leaked out in one continuous thick clump that mixed with the hot blood spray that painted the Thief’s knuckles. He leaned in his own breath rippled the surface of the exposed, raw muscles, and savored the way the victim’s eye darted in a frantic panic, as he reeled it out of its socket like a dying fish.

“Do you feel that?’ The Thief whispered, ‘That’s the exact moment your brain forgets what the color blue looks like.’

He went back to work and used the serrated edge of the blade to saw through the thick, white cable. With every agonizing millimeter the Thief cut, the victim’s eye rolled in panic, trying to fight against the inevitable. Then, with one last micro cut, the eye was freed from the socket. The Thief carried the eye trailing a jagged, red-slicked tail of shredded muscle and golden-yellow fat to its new home.

The eye was dropped into the glass jar without a care. The splash of the globe that hit the blue liquid made the victim’s own pulse scream. With a dead language, the Thief chanted a guttural tone that gargled in his throat like acidic vomit, unwilling to pass through his esophagus. He dropped a long sticky string of saliva that broke as soon as it hit the blue liquid. The eye came to life and began to swim within the jar like a eel. The Thief secured a lid and placed the jar on the shelf and then put all his focus back on his victim. He traced the empty, red raw hole where the light used to be with his finger. It slid over the exposed nerves that were still trying to translate the dark into an image.

“One down,” the Thief whispered, his voice a jagged vibration against the smell of blood and tears, “but you still have so much more to show me before the night is over.’

The next tool he used was a small silver spoon that looked harmless, but its looks were deceiving. He meticulously packed the caustic granules of lye directly onto the exposed, twitching optic nerve stump. The dry chemical instantly reacted. The sound was a low hiss, the ‘sizzle-pop’ of living tissue being chemically liquefied and charred from the inside out. As the granules began to eat through the delicate orbital floor, a gray, white vapor of liquified proteins smoked out of the cavity and stung the Thief’s eyes as he leaned in to savor the smell of alkaline rot and scorched iron. The victim’s remaining eye watched in terror as the smoke curled out of the empty, bubbling hole where his sight once lived. The pain was so blind and absolute that his vocal cords snap in a silent, airless scream.

“Do you smell that?” the Thief whispers, his voice excited and childlike as he watched the chemical mist, “Oh, of course not. Well, that’s the scent of your own memories being bleached into nothingness.”

The victims’ back snapped off the seat, and the leather straps over his shattered arm groaned as he tried to scream for mercy that he could no longer voice. The caustic soda forest fire inside his skull, liquefying the orbital fat and charring the delicate bone of the socket into a bubbling slurry of alkaline rot. He tried to form the word ‘please,’ but his mouth is just too raw, his throat a red cavern of wet, truncated muscle made a sickened gurgle hiss as the chemical smoke stings his remaining eye. The pain began to shatter his brain with a slow throb that robbed his mind of reality. His nerves bleached into nothingness as he teetered on the edge of unconsciousness.

“There’s no mercy in the silence,” the Sensory Thief said through the smell of scorched iron and lye, “only the perfect, clinical weight of the void I’m carving into you.”

He pressed the tip of a thin glass rod into the bubbling, caustic slurry of the eye-socket, and in a slow scraping motion, he stirred the mess like a miniature cauldron. With every pass, he peeled away another layer of the blackened, liquefied periosteum, exposed the raw, ivory nerves underneath just so the soda can bite into them with a fresh unbearable fury.

The victim’s body was a bridge of pure, unadulterated agony. His tongueless mouth opened in a silent scream that tasted of his own vaporized proteins and copper scented blood. The smell of alkaline rot was so thick it stung the Thief’s eyes, but he didn’t blink. His knuckles turned white as he dug the rod deeper into the smoking socket. The victim’s screams translated into clear vomit that exploded out of his gaped mouth. The Thief savored every second of the victim’s mind being torn apart.

“Do you feel the light being scraped away?” The Thief mocked his prey, “Now it’s time to release your second eye from that pesky socket.”

He didn’t reach for the scalpel this time; instead, he produced a slender, specialized silver vacuum needle of his own design.

“This one’s not for you,” the Thief said in a cold tone, “I need it for my son, so I’m going to drain it to collapse the socket around the eye while it’s still tethered to your brain. Ready or not.”

He slid the needle into the inner corner of the eye as it bypasses the bone to reach the deep nerves of the optic apex. The victim, helpless to do anything but watch with his one remaining field of vision, tried to keep from passing out as he felt suction of his orbital fluids drain.

The sound a haunting ‘slurp-crunch’ sound made the victim retch as the needle bypasses the bone and begins to suck the very fat and fluid out from behind his eye. The vacuum pressure made his eyeball bulge out of the socket until the white sclera began to spit up the clear jelly. The victim’s throat gurgled and hissed as the internal pressure of his skull shifted. The bone of the orbital floor cracked and folded inward like dry parchment under the force. The Thief reached into the widened gap with a pair of thin silver pliers and griped the optic nerve. The victim’s body jerked and spasmed as the Thief began to pull the brainstem forward inch by agonizing inch.

“Watch me,” the Thief commanded, “I’m reaching into the very core of your memories to pluck the light from its root.”

He used the pliers to slowly crush the optic nerve that sent a final bolt of white-hot trauma through the victim’s brain. With a sudden pop, the second globe was torn from the collapsing socket. A slicked tail of shredded muscle and golden fat steamed in the cold cellar air once it was free.

The Thief didn’t touch the heavy orb with his exposed hands. Instead, he nestled it into a small chest filled with crushed ice.

“This one stays fresh,” the Thief said. As the victim’s body slumped into a silent unconsciousness, the two empty holes in his skull were the only witnesses to the Thief’s surgical perfection.

“We can’t let you see with this eye anymore, can’t we. It doesn’t belong to you!” The Thief snapped, knowing his victim wouldn’t understand or hear his words. “Let’s sever the connection, shall we.”

The victim’s eye that swam in a nearby jar saw the Thief produce a small vial. It watched as he poured the clear, oily liquid from the vial into the raw, vacant hole of the second socket. The fluid gurgled as it filled the orbital cavity and seeped into the victim’s shattered sinuses.

With a flick of a lighter, he touched the flame to the victim’s face, and the socket instantly erupted into a pillar of blue fire. The victim’s body bucked in unimaginable agony that made the straps over his shattered arm scream under the tension. The Thief stood perfectly still as the flickering light of the burning eye socket danced and shot out like dragons’ breath toward the ceiling. The victim’s silent screams were felt through the air as the jars that held his body parts shook.

“Do you feel the warmth of my gaze? Said the Thief through his excitement. “This is the only light you’ll ever know again.”

The victim’s screams sounded like a tortured animal that tore through his throat like a wet, guttural roar. He vomited copper scented blood into the flickering blue flames that only seemed to intensify their heat. His whole body thrashed from pure, unadulterated agony, and he bucked so hard against the straps that the wood of the chair began to splinter under the weight of his trauma. Each time he heaved, a fresh geyser of liquefied fat spattered out of his eye socket and hissed as it hit the floor like molten lava. The Thief leaned into the heat, the blue flames danced across the reflection in his eyes as he let out a soft chuckle of pure delight, his knuckles white as he gripped the edge of the table to feel the vibration of the victim’s shattering mind.

“Look at the light you’re making,” he whispered, his voice cold as the roar of the burning marrow and the smell of vaporized proteins blazed on. “It’s the most beautiful thing you’ll ever produce.” His chuckles slowly turned into maniacal howls of laughter as he carried the ice chest up the stairs. The victim felt the flame in his hollow eye socket die and also, he wished for death, but it never came. Instead, he knew more pain would come before death’s mercy would find him, and that’s what scared him.

To be continued….

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The victim watched, his chest heaved in the silence, as the heavy thud of boots began to retreat upward, leaving him alone with the jars.

The silence was a physical weight, but as the Thief’s footsteps vanished above, the victim’s eyes drifted to the shelf. In the first jar, his tongue floated like a pale, bloated slug in a sea of cobalt blue. He could taste the liquid within the jar. The phantom saltiness flooded his dry mouth, a sharp, brine like sting that tasted of ocean rot and chemical preservation. Then came the smell. Even without a nose, the sulfurous, thick stench of old eggs and stagnant water invaded his mind. It was a heavy, nauseating cloud that coated the inside of his skull, but the most haunting part was the sound. Through the glass of the third jar, where his ears sat suspended within the thick blue liquid. The muffled vibration of distant sounds made him sick. He felt every low, muffled vibration through the liquid, turning the Thief’s movements upstairs into deep, thuds that vibrated through the victim’s every cell. It was as if his soul was being stretched across the room, tethered to glass prisons by invisible, arcing wires.

Driven by a desperate surge of adrenaline, he began to pull against the zip-ties, the rough plastic bit into his wrists until the skin tore that slicked his hand with his own blood. Each tug sent a new vibration through the floor that echoed back to him through a series of sharp underwater cracks. He watched his tongue in the fluid as the phantom taste of copper and sulfur thickened throughout his throat as his exertion intensified. With every inch of progress he made toward the shelf, it felt like dragging his soul through broken glass. His eyes focused on the jars as he realized that to escape the cellar, he’d first have to steal his own senses back from the Thief.

As he tried to launch his entire weight away from the chair, a guttural voiceless scream died in his throat. The plastic zip-ties held firm, acting as a dull, blade against his flesh. There was a sound like silk tearing, as the resistance finally gave way. He watched in a daze as the skin of his right hand sloughed off in one piece, peeling backward from the knuckles to the wrist like a discarded, crimson glove. The exposed muscle and white flashes of tendon were instantly bathed in a hot, frantic rush of blood that splattered the floor in patterns. The sensation was a white-hot sun exploding in his mind, yet he put the pain out of his mind. His hand, a raw weeping mass of meat and bone, reached out with flayed fingers that trembled toward the shelf of jars. The phantom taste of sulfur in his jarred tongue turning into a metallic tang of his own agony.

His skinless hand shook as it narrowed the gap, and his muscles glistened under the dim cellar light as he tried to stretch further. His raw fingertips scraped against the handle of the scalpel, the same tool that caused his torcher was about to be his salvation. But as he lunged, his body screamed in protest against the zip-tie that tethered his other arm in place. With one last quick jerk, he watched in slow-motion horror as the scalpel slid across the table; the rasp of metal against wood grain echoed through the ears in the nearby jar. As the sharp underwater screech stopped, he saw the tool had moved just an inch further. It settled just beyond reach of his crimson stumps. The phantom taste of sulfur in his mouth curdled into the bitter, acidic sting of despair. He was so close he could smell the steel through the jar on the shelf, yet the distance might as well have been a mile through broken glass.

Instant rage shot through him, and he began to slam his raw, skinless hand against the table's edge like a butcher's mallet. Each impact sent a spray of blood across the unreachable blade. In a blind, burst of agony, he lunged one last time, his flayed fist connecting not with the scalpel but with an empty jar. The jar exploded into shards of jagged diamonds that buried themselves deep into his exposed muscle, and the sound oh, the sound was a wave that screamed through the liquid in the jars. He froze; his hand of glass and gore silenced his mind as the terrifying realization of how loud he had just been made him grow cold.

"The bastard had to have heard that." He thought as his body shivered with fright.

He pulled his ruined hand close to his chest, the diamond shards against his raw muscle, and bone felt like crushing gravel and fire. The red haze of pain sparked a primal clarity, and he focused on the thick nylon strap biting into his sternum, then back at the glistening, blood-slicked glass embedded in his knuckles. It was a saw made of his own flesh. Excitement ran through his body for the first time since his abduction, and he needed to use it before it faded away. With a deep guttural breath, he began to press the sharpest edge of a shard against the edge of the nylon strap. The friction of glass on fabric started to fray through the first several inches of the strap.

He sawed with frantic speed, the jagged glass grinding against his own fingers even as it bit into the tough nylon. Each stroke cut little by little that sent the glass blade through the fabric and into the flesh of his chest. His movements quickened when he saw his progress paying off. He felt the heat of his own blood lubricating the glass, making the shards slip and dig deeper into his muscle, but he didn't stop. Then, with a sudden snap that echoed like a gunshot, the first strap gave way. The tension released so suddenly it felt his ribs crack, and for the first time, he the heavy weight against his torso lightened.

The underwater thud-thud-thud in the jar became a physical blow to his absent ears. He was halfway through the second strap, the jagged glass buried deep in his palm that it felt like it had become part of his anatomy. The above sound throughout the cobalt fluid was like a dull drum of doom. He stopped cutting as his chest heaved, the half-frayed nylon tightened under the tension of his frozen body. Blood dripped from the cuts over his chest that filled his lap with a deep pool of his own fluid. He felt the air in the room shift as the cellar door creaked open at the top of the stairs.

His mind raced, and the terror began to swell within him when he knew the Thief was coming. The capture went wild, his skinless hand moved like a piston, and the shards shrieked against the nylon. In his blind panic, the glass slipped, carving a deep canyon into the meat of his own chest inches below the strap. A silent explosion, the pain blinded him even as the 'thud-thud-thud' in the jars grew louder, sharper, and moreover. Each step from above was a hammer blow to his soul, as the shadow of the Thief began to stretch down the cellar’s stairs. He frantically clawed at his own leaking life, his body still tethered to the dark.

Step by agonizing step, the Thief descended the cellar stairs, each heavy thud vibrating through the floorboards and into the cobalt filled jars on the shelf. Desperation took hold of the victim, and he launched into a wild, sawing motion at the stubborn nylon strap with his glass filled fist.

Then, without warning, he stood in the doorway, a silent pale shadow, with his head cocked like a curious predator. He inhaled the sharp tang of fresh blood and the sterile scent of broken glass.

The victim's face, red with agony and terror, swung his ruined, skinless fist in a blind, desperate arc. It was a harmless, pathetic weapon that didn't even make the Thief flinch. He let out a chilling laugh that scared the victim, and with a movement almost too fast to track, he brought a small wooden club down on the victim’s forearm.

CRACK!

The victim watched in a frozen daze as the radius and ulna punched through the skin of his arm, two smooth white fangs of bone exposed to the cold air. Blood sprayed from the fresh wound, and the victim howled in pain. His glass filled hand hung at an impossible angle as his body convulsed out of control. The Thief leaned in close, his eyes reflecting the flickering low light. He whispered into the gaping hole in the side of the victim's head, knowing he couldn't hear.

"Eager to finish, are we? You should rest now. You're far more interesting when you're broken." He smiled with his eyes before he began his work once again.

To be continued…

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He pushed the door open with strength he didn't have, and the hinges letting out a squeal of pain that matched his swollen joints. The room was a clinical whitewash of emptiness and smelled of lavender and bleach. In the center, if the sterile room sat a Victorian crib that swayed with a slow, hypnotic creak. The Thief collapsed against the slats, his fingers trembling as they reached into the bundle of silk lace. There was no soft warmth of a child, only the unnatural pulsing of a mass.

A dozen stolen ears, stitched into fleshy mosaic, twitched at the sound of his approach. Then, a cluster of vocal cords throbbed and began to hum. Its cry was a horrid multi toned vibration of a thousand stolen voices trying to knit themselves into a single lullaby. The Thief closed his eyes as he leaned his forehead against the cold wood and reached into the crib.

His touch lost their cruel clinical precision and became soft and reverent. He lifted the heavy patchwork of stolen life and tucked the thing against the crook of his neck. His thumb traced the seam where a dozen different ears were stitched.

"Hush now, my little one," he whispers, his voice loving that vibrated against the mass of stolen skin.

He began to pace the room with a slow sway humming the same lullaby that the cluster of vocal cords sang. In this moment, he was a father tending to his child, trying to love a soul into existence from the scraps of his victims.

As the humming turned into desperate clicking from a dozen stolen throats parched for sustenance, the Thief didn't reach for a bottle or jar. Instead, with a shaky sigh, he pulled back the cuff of his linen shirt to reveal a roadmap of jagged scars. He took a small blade from his pocket, and with the practiced gentleness of a father preparing a meal, he opened a fresh vein.

The warmth spilled out of his wrist and flowed into the throbbing membrane of the abomination's many mouths. The Thief watched in a daze as his fleshy creation swelled, the stolen vocal cords shifted into a satisfied, low thrum. He pulled away just as the world started to tilt away, his head spinning from the loss of blood. He pressed a tender kiss to the patchwork of stolen skin and spoke in a slight slur in his drunken state.

"Grow for me," he whispered, his voice barely a ghost of sound as he tucked the mass back into its cradle of silk.

The Thief leaned down and pressed one last kiss to the hellish child.

"Sleep now, my sweet," he murmured in the silence, but then, a sharp, distant thud echoed from below. It was the frantic, clumsy kicking of the victim against the chair. The Thief’s entire posture shifted from a father's grace into a predator's sharp edge in an instant. A flash of annoyance crossed his tired face as he straightened his linen shirt and wiped his mouth against the blood-stained cuff. He turned toward the door, his eyes dark and clinical once more. The nurturing warmth was now gone, replaced by a dark irritation from the interruption.

"Silence the noise," his internal voice whispered. He turned toward the door, his shadow stretched long and thin across the wood floor. The final sound of the night was the heavy thud from his boots that stomped down the wooden steps back into the darkness.

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